ANCIENT GREEK-STYLE PERFORMANCE ON POINT OF VIEW
IN AUTOBIOGRAPHICAL ILLNESS POETRY

Susie Wilson


*  Start walking, while the head tune plays. *

 

            You you you you you you you you you you    ;    

            you you you you you you you you you you    . 

 

*  When it seems right, perhaps on the next outbreath, stamp feet. *

 

You you, you you, you you…

                                                   Y.     O.     U.    

Moving from rustic dance into lament – think bridge & chorus. *

                       

            Why you?

Oh, why you?

Oh,         why           you?

                                                 οἴμοι

            * Solo. *

No.

No me,

            no I.

 

            No ‘lyric shame’,

            no confessional

            non-sense.

                                    No, no, n O !                  

                                        No otototototoi popoi da

 

* Break it down now. Spoken with feeling, falling to stage whisper. *

 

                             Oi, you ’n’ all.

Keep your distance, Lady                       Melanoma.


οἴμοι: Ancient Greek for ‘woe is me’.

otototototoi popoi da: Ancient Greek articulation of grief, horror, despair, physical agony, in tragedies. Untranslatable.

Disabled Poets Prize 2024 winner Susie Wilson is an auDHD writer living in Sheffield, published currently in Northern Gravy, Black Bough, Envoi and numerous anthologies, commended and longlisted in Fresher, Poets & Players and The Rialto Nature and Place competitions. Her debut pamphlet, 'Nowhere Near As Safe As A Snake In Bed', dealing with living with advanced melanoma and the cutting-edge science used to treat it, will be coming out with Verve Poetry Press this November. Please say hello on Instagram (@concordmoose), Twitter/X (@concordmoose) or www.susiewilsonpoet.com